Wednesday, 19 October 2011

Why Walk When You Can Teleport? {con.}

Electricity flew around Caitlyn, stiffening her body and encasing her in a world of black. She flinched as a miniature bolt hit her smack in the forehead, zapping her.
She could not speak, as her mouth was stuck closed, but her sensation was still on edge.
Just then, Caitlyn panicked internally, and, losing all sense of life, she fainted.

2 comments:

  1. omg omg omg omg!!!!! CONTINUE pleaseeeee!!!! so good so good so good so good!!!!!

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  2. awesome! I suggest making the fainting part a bit more dramatic though... I hope you continue writing this!

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